Hello, Snippetteers! — things don’t get much more WIP-ish than this. Here’s a snippet I wrote last night. Seven sentences instead of six — my apologies, but I think you’ll see why I needed the extra sentence. All I’m going to say by way of a lead-in is that the first speaker is Rhoann, the half-Royal Water Fae. And that this is Rhoann’s first kiss.
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“Am I doing this right?” Mac felt Rhoann’s lips moving, breathed in Rhoann’s breath.
And Mac laughed. Even knowing these few moments were all he was ever going to have of the Fae, he laughed. Joy fizzed under his skin, all through him, in a way it hadn’t in months. “You’re doing it perfect.”
“Show me how to make it better than perfect.”
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And a couple of links for y’all —
Rainbow Snippets on Facebook, for more LGBTQIA goodies: https://www.facebook.com/groups/RainbowSnippets/
MANTLED IN MIST, SoulShares # 6 (in which we become much better acquainted with Mac and Lucien): http://ow.ly/ZXcCQ
Rory Ni Coileain 
How bittersweet! Lovely, but bittersweet. I hope Mac is wrong…
Sweet! 🙂
Look forward to the showing!
this is sweet tinged with that hint of Mac’s regret. I really like it.
I love first kisses. So much to learn.
So much going on in such a short snippet. Definitely wondering what’s better than perfect. 🙂
I hope they can have more of each other! Perfect snippet!
Sweet and vulnerable! I hope we see more of them together. 🙂
Lovely. And, yes, you definitely needed that last line.
Really lovely