
Good morning, Rainbow Snippetteers! — today’s Snippet is from a short story I’m working on as my Camp NaNoWriMo project this month. I’m taking part in an anthology of m/m stories based on Shakespeare’s plays and sonnets; each author has picked a favorite play, and the stories all incorporate the plays in some way. I chose The Tempest, and in my story, “Deeper Than Did Ever Plummet Sound,” we meet Clarence Limont, a renowned Shakespearean actor from London who is beginning to think it’s time to pack it all in, but he’s agreed to play Prospero in an off-off-Broadway production of The Tempest as a favor to the director, an old school chum. And he just might be about to recapture some of the magic of the theater….
In this snippet, Clarence has just arrived for the first “table read” of the play with Jeremy’s company, an all-male Shakespearean company. (I’ve had to go a few sentences over my six, I fear — I hope you’ll forgive me the indulgence…)
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Interrupted conversations and awestruck stares seemed to hang in the air as Clarence wrestled out of his too-heavy wool coat, and he stifled a sigh. Sometimes he wondered how far from the London stage he would have to get before he could be just Clarence Limont, and not the Clarence Limont.
The Battle of the Burberry over at last, he dropped into his folding chair, a good deal more slowly than he would have liked. No doubt the younger men around the table thought him decrepit… well, he’d earned a certain amount of decrepitude, he supposed.
Jeremy rubbed his hands together briskly, beaming. “Now that we’re all here, I’ll say it again, gentlemen – good morning. And, obvious though it is, welcome to the first table read for our production of The Tempest.”
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“Battle of the burberry.” 😀 This looks like a terrific story!
I really like this!
Great turn of phrase there!
“he’d earned a certain amount of decrepitude” LOL, I love this line. Looks like a great story!
Oh, and they’re doing the Tempest. I once saw Patrick Stewart in the Tempest, and it was fab. No decrepitude there at all, and he was probably the same age as your MC. This looks like it might be fun.
That must have been amazing! — I saw him in his one-man version of A Christmas Carol on Broadway many years ago — he later described the performance I was at as one of his three favorite moments in the theater. 😀 And I’m basing Clarence on Sir Ian McKellen.
lovely!
Cool! That looks like a very interesting project, and a very interesting story. You certainly have a way with words!
I get a good feel for Clarence in this snippet. Almost feel sorry for him!
Interesting. I did The Tempest for ‘O’ level English.
This sounds great! The Battle of the Burberry made me smile.
Lovely. His turn of phrase feels very theatrical.
Love this! Thanks for sharing.
Great snippet. I’m going to love getting to know Clarence. (And that second paragraph is perfect!)
I like the layers in this. His awareness of how he’s seen by others and how he sees himself.
I think that’s a big part of being a successful actor — and probably a big part of the burden as well. You’re always gauging how other people see you…
Lovely snippet. I especially like that second paragraph.