Hello, Snippetteers! — I’m on a temporary writing hiatus, probably till the end of January, so I won’t be putting up brand-spanking new (hee hee) material for a while. But I have eight novels’ worth of source material, so hopefully y’all won’t get bored over the next few weeks! This snippet, from STONE COLD, takes place immediately after Terry, the human MC, following Maelduin’s directions, steps into a wellspring — a circle of magickal energy with its source in the Fae Realm.
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βWhat the hell?β
The floor tilted and swooped under Terry. Except that it did no such thing β his inner ear assured him he was on solid ground. The rest of his body, though, totally ignored his inner ear, because it was convinced he was on a tumbling satellite being piloted by a drunk. He dropped to his knees, bent forward until his forehead touched the floor, covered his head with his forearms, scrunched his eyes closed. Anything not to fall off the floor; anything not to have to look at the distorted nothingness that had surrounded him in the instant before he shut it out.
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“Anything not to fall off the floor” – love it! I really felt for the guy.
Oh, that would be awful! That kind of swirling would make me feel sick, I think.
Great sensory description in this one.
love the descriptions, the whole moving floor thing would have me grabbing for something.
Excellent snippet. I was wobbling along with the poor guy.
I really want to know what Maelduin is playing at. Terry shouldn’t be messed with. Really. π
Vivid and disconcerting description. I have vertigo. π
Really vivid description. Love it
Great “special effects”. I love the not falling off the floor line. (I have been that dizzy.)
So have I. They say, write what you know. π